haiku attempts on bees, blossoms and promises

I haven't written any haiku attempts in quite awhile. I decided it was time, once again.

Two haiku attempts on bees, blossoms and promises

ancient bonsai
dawn delight blossoms
bees dance creating

(C) 2017 david w palmer

bees in the blossoms
ask me to dance
dandelions wave

(C) 2017 david w palmer